Monday, December 10, 2012

The Laws of Love, Lisa White ~ Book Review



Lisa White starts us off with an interesting character in Livi.  She's strong, professional, independent. We like her. *I* liked her.

She crashes into the love of her life pretty early on, and we're already rooting for their reunion. We're watching her blush and react like the teenager she was when she knew him.

What's he doing here? When did he come back?

I felt good about where they were heading. I had hopes that their reunion *might* take the predictable route and run throughout the story.

But Ms. White had other plans and reunited them fairly quickly. That was rough reading for me, because as much as I was happy that this was happening, I was missing backstory. Awkwardness was glossed over too quickly. When you run into that crush from high school? The one you still remember kissing? It can't fall into place that fast - can it?

This book is a really short novel in comparison to many that are out there these days. And with books oozing over into the 500+ page mark, something short and sweet is perfect for the holiday season. But sometimes losing length loses a little bit more. I'd have liked for Jake and Livi to reunite more slowly. Let us feel that the powerhouse working woman that Livi was and has been doesn't just disappear crying into the arms of her new "old" flame when things turn wrong.

And I'm disappointed in the way Nadine turned so quickly, too. I was feeling a bond and a relationship between her and Livi, and I had hopes they'd take that into a friendship, as well. I think I just read a similar type of "casting" and it was so strong that my hopes were these two women would support one another.

Overall, I'm not sure how to review the story. I don't want to give anything away, as is my norm, and I don't want to take you through the relationships too much more - for fear of making you totally confused!

For Ms. White, her debut novel is an interesting one, but I'd love to see more of what she can do with characters when she is granted more space to do so. I think given the chance to flesh out the reunion of Jake and Livi, we might have gotten from her the true love story that we - as readers - often look for. And if not, if things were meant to turn and the two were meant to separate - we'd have more background detail and more time to fully grasp why.

And for me? I would certainly pick up another book by this author, but hopefully a longer one so I can enjoy more detail and description, and less quick "sound-bites" throughout.

* I was provided with a copy of this book by TLC Book Tours to facilitate my review. All opinions expressed here are my own.*

7 comments:

Ducky said...

I miss reading. If I made new year resolutions lists (which I don't) I would put reading at the top of it!

JDaniel4's Mom said...

I love hearing the back story too.

Lisa White said...

Thank you for taking time to read my debut novel!

Sarah Williamson said...

I am totally with you when it comes to character development! Probably why I love TV shows that develop characters over a season and long books that do the same thing. Great review - I'll have to check this book out! :)

-Sarah
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Lisa @ Two Bears Farm said...

Sometimes having a shorter book is nice too.

trish said...

I like really strong female characters in novels!

Thanks for being on the tour!

Tanya @ Mom's Small Victories said...

Interesting review, I am a sucker for a predictable get back together ending. I sense how torn you are with this one, now I am too, not sure whether I should add it to my to read list.

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