tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post961178995109603132..comments2024-03-05T05:39:54.907-05:00Comments on Good Girl Gone Redneck: Parallel lives ...Andreahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06972798018825603047noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-63877931386451226642011-08-20T08:49:29.921-04:002011-08-20T08:49:29.921-04:00Like the others, I wondered if this internal monol...Like the others, I wondered if this internal monologue was fiction or non-fiction until the end. I had a very clear picture of an angry, confused teenager. The voice was very authentic.<br /><br />I felt a little like the last line was kind of tacked on, but, having done this prompt myself, I fought and fought that last line, until I finally changed it to suit me.Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-44418031221037766032011-08-20T01:19:27.837-04:002011-08-20T01:19:27.837-04:00Hi my name is Andrea and I am a super talented sto...Hi my name is Andrea and I am a super talented story writer!! At first I wasn't sure where you were going and breathed a sigh of relieve when I read "fiction":)Good Girl Gone Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12480401325896207068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-62360798351203396162011-08-19T22:12:04.943-04:002011-08-19T22:12:04.943-04:00I like what you did with this a lot! It was hard t...I like what you did with this a lot! It was hard to read, because the subject matter was so intense. Especially for a mom. But it should be hard to read--that's the whole point.<br /><br />Really well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-60078608966138042322011-08-19T19:59:29.311-04:002011-08-19T19:59:29.311-04:00I'm so glad to hear this isn't real. I th...I'm so glad to hear this isn't real. I think you did an excellent job of capturing that tension and pain, the way the narrator vows to never have that life.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-46227143220908947712011-08-19T18:48:58.332-04:002011-08-19T18:48:58.332-04:00So glad you said it was fiction. You brought that ...So glad you said it was fiction. You brought that feeling out so well. I've heard those screams. I've heard that silence.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-28752416906391166782011-08-19T15:11:44.266-04:002011-08-19T15:11:44.266-04:00Like the others, I worried this was real. Well don...Like the others, I worried this was real. Well done!Sorta Southern Single Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14349718837546442408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-58249787905759362532011-08-19T15:05:45.145-04:002011-08-19T15:05:45.145-04:00That really did feel real. I wanted to read more!...That really did feel real. I wanted to read more!<br />www.rebeccabany.comMemoirs of Me & Minehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14366737473619508232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-43203073034146056812011-08-19T14:03:54.617-04:002011-08-19T14:03:54.617-04:00I would have thought it was real. You did a great ...I would have thought it was real. You did a great job of bringing the emotion to the piece!Liz Mayshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13960276167677132860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-1845093291022032302011-08-19T13:59:17.474-04:002011-08-19T13:59:17.474-04:00For such a painful subject this was written so bea...For such a painful subject this was written so beautifully. I could feel the pain.Just Stuff From a Boomerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13440903695801765867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-41736229478985986982011-08-19T09:43:04.433-04:002011-08-19T09:43:04.433-04:00What a sad tale...one that is felt by so many I...What a sad tale...one that is felt by so many I'm sure. You did an excellent job of portraying that pain and frustration, the absolute need of the main character to never be at that point in her own relationships. <br /><br />Stopping by and following from WOE. Great job!Katie @ Chicken Noodle Gravyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02852793993330125727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-2435707427674700182011-08-19T09:08:37.723-04:002011-08-19T09:08:37.723-04:00I really like this. You brought forth the anger an...I really like this. You brought forth the anger and frustration really well.<br /><br />Did you find it as awkward as I trying to get the first and last lines to gel with the rest?Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-23067661520345325322011-08-19T08:37:12.423-04:002011-08-19T08:37:12.423-04:00Ugh, what pain. Well written, I believed every wor...Ugh, what pain. Well written, I believed every word, wanting to offer comfort and a hug.Margihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00380912871792176901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-85938660566703572802011-08-19T06:37:16.803-04:002011-08-19T06:37:16.803-04:00Such a real story for so many.
So relatable andre...Such a real story for so many. <br />So relatable andrea!Leighannnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09049725790375843473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-23571165510676556812011-08-19T02:35:13.076-04:002011-08-19T02:35:13.076-04:00I'm happy to hear this is fiction, but there a...I'm happy to hear this is fiction, but there are so many kids who have to go through this, and I thought you portrayed that well.Amy Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08005645902363448208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-89330198986364359312011-08-19T00:45:21.701-04:002011-08-19T00:45:21.701-04:00The story here felt so real. I wasn't sure if ...The story here felt so real. I wasn't sure if you decided to do a non-fiction piece until I read at the end that this was fiction. Great job with the realism.<br /><br />I was hoping for a happy ending. For a resolution to the arguing and THAT being the reason you would realize you were "already home." I think this only comes from the fact that I knew what the last sentence was NVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17267219296647761938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-67524750982569972932011-08-19T00:37:59.415-04:002011-08-19T00:37:59.415-04:00This reminds me of a friends household, so very sa...This reminds me of a friends household, so very sad, you wrote it so well. Glad to hear it was fiction!Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10395153992892479101noreply@blogger.com