tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post7238434149327975433..comments2024-03-05T05:39:54.907-05:00Comments on Good Girl Gone Redneck: A Hot and Steamy MessAndreahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06972798018825603047noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-91178833395106415492011-08-14T08:09:13.438-04:002011-08-14T08:09:13.438-04:00Love this. I love the not wanting to, but REALLY w...Love this. I love the not wanting to, but REALLY wanting to at the same time. Hot & very well done!VictoriaKPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07987993161693042703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-18893190329713249592011-08-13T23:31:28.283-04:002011-08-13T23:31:28.283-04:00YUM.
On a few levels, but I love the messy kitche...YUM.<br /><br />On a few levels, but I love the messy kitchen, the flour, the boiling over pot. All such a great metaphor for the sex, and your language is great.Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-55931711450784977282011-08-13T11:58:30.326-04:002011-08-13T11:58:30.326-04:00Steamy indeed - they needed to hook up in my opini...Steamy indeed - they needed to hook up in my opinion ;-)Lisa @ Two Bears Farmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03464839163693785901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-55196375227109325972011-08-12T18:58:33.151-04:002011-08-12T18:58:33.151-04:00My stars and garters!! I'm over here fanning ...My stars and garters!! I'm over here fanning myself from the heat of that post!<br /><br />Awesome job!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-84295059765008830392011-08-12T18:50:30.473-04:002011-08-12T18:50:30.473-04:00Love this! Great job with building the anticipati...Love this! Great job with building the anticipation and conveying all that nervous energy. Steamy without being explicit, well done!Jessica Annehttp://adventureswiththreegirls.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-37875358762698963262011-08-12T16:34:31.819-04:002011-08-12T16:34:31.819-04:00My first time here and wow, I really loved this. Y...My first time here and wow, I really loved this. Your dialouge is rich and "right", the halting and stalling and the "give in". <br /><br />I am a lover of angst and this gave it to me in so many ways.Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-75068288500694910572011-08-12T16:09:37.542-04:002011-08-12T16:09:37.542-04:00Love this! Hot, steamy, excellent dialogue, body l...Love this! Hot, steamy, excellent dialogue, body language, flow and rhythm.<br /><br />You nailed it.<br /><br />Hee! :)Galit Breenhttp://theselittlewaves.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-31725282796295622982011-08-12T15:42:44.555-04:002011-08-12T15:42:44.555-04:00I'm with Lilu, you are wonderful w/ the dialog...I'm with Lilu, you are wonderful w/ the dialogue, something I am not great at and too nervous to attempt. It just doesn't come easily and I have a lot of trouble with it...<br /><br />Love the kitchen scene, the flour everywhere, etc...will have to go read your link to the rest!erin margolinhttp://www.erinmargolin.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-30339924304096989632011-08-12T14:17:05.207-04:002011-08-12T14:17:05.207-04:00I love this story! Of Em and Matt! I'm hooked...I love this story! Of Em and Matt! I'm hooked!!! I'm SO rootin' for them!!!! <br /><br />A new follower from TRDC Red Writing Hood :)Sweatyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07886118636402604168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-91416039556378196592011-08-12T12:43:11.905-04:002011-08-12T12:43:11.905-04:00You have a talent for dialogue, gurl.
Hot post.
Ni...You have a talent for dialogue, gurl.<br />Hot post.<br />Nice work *thumbs up*Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06325724692596441614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-30074501600209487292011-08-12T12:36:52.018-04:002011-08-12T12:36:52.018-04:00oo la la. steamy indeed. i believe you nailed it. ...oo la la. steamy indeed. i believe you nailed it. wanted to know what the source of the tension between them was. that's not criticism, i think it's good that i wanted to know more. and i loved her wondering why she kept saying thanks. totally enjoyed this.Christine Siracusahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09454182371195180210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-78154258100030694752011-08-12T10:45:20.949-04:002011-08-12T10:45:20.949-04:00So well written! I have to go back and read ALL OF...So well written! I have to go back and read ALL OF IT! :)sarahhttp://sarahlipoff.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-29242706925296076382011-08-12T10:12:29.052-04:002011-08-12T10:12:29.052-04:00I really like what you're doing with dialogue....I really like what you're doing with dialogue. My favorite was, "I don't want to either." <br /><br />Why is the kitchen such a hot place? Something about the excuse to touch each other...moving hair, wiping...things. <br /><br />Hee! Love this.Nancy Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313721217543578257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-22910659109491068622011-08-12T09:58:21.173-04:002011-08-12T09:58:21.173-04:00there was some steam happening...and not just from...there was some steam happening...and not just from that bubbling pot :)<br /><br />I enjoyed this. It flowed really well and my imagination was put into overdrive :)Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-10721344602973446132011-08-12T09:15:57.694-04:002011-08-12T09:15:57.694-04:00Whoa girl! Hot!Whoa girl! Hot!Shellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06811697675090627618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-46994242119969510052011-08-12T08:44:45.905-04:002011-08-12T08:44:45.905-04:00mmm.
yes ma'am.
you've got the buildup d...mmm.<br /><br />yes ma'am.<br /><br />you've got the buildup down really well :) two prompts with awesome foreplay, both verbal and emotional and juuuuuust enough physical to leave you readers wanting...<br /><br />more.<br /><br />of your writing. yeah. your writing.<br /><br />*swoon*Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06666555088992266185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-55959300264561707522011-08-12T07:07:54.255-04:002011-08-12T07:07:54.255-04:00I cannot comment on your technique... I'm too ...I cannot comment on your technique... I'm too busy blushing! :)Sorta Southern Single Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14349718837546442408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-77412250612293305562011-08-12T05:52:08.666-04:002011-08-12T05:52:08.666-04:00I love that you are still writing this story. This...I love that you are still writing this story. This definitely did the trick. I dont think you could have done it the way you did without doing it the way you did it. I see them on the stairs all hot and bothered, enraptured in each other. GREAT job!The Drama Mamahttp://frommywriteside.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-61495878377683762772011-08-12T02:41:25.804-04:002011-08-12T02:41:25.804-04:00Great post! I feel like I'm there.Great post! I feel like I'm there.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03431751293876429570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-63414207802724274282011-08-12T02:08:31.394-04:002011-08-12T02:08:31.394-04:00Ok, now I have to go read more.
This sounds vague...Ok, now I have to go read more.<br /><br />This sounds vaguely familiar. The cooking talent reminds me of the gal who got married while drunk...<br /><br />I'll have to see if I'm right.<br /><br />I thought you did a fabulous job with the prompt (which I admit, I wasn't sure what they were looking for). You did manage sex without any quivering members.<br /><br />I felt the heat. TheKelly K @ Writing w/ Chaoshttp://writingwithchaos.com/noreply@blogger.com