tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post2425134828678178856..comments2024-03-05T05:39:54.907-05:00Comments on Good Girl Gone Redneck: Where is he?Andreahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06972798018825603047noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-49206694433426479562011-04-19T14:19:30.069-04:002011-04-19T14:19:30.069-04:00Hey girl! I loved this!!
And I couldn't help...Hey girl! I loved this!! <br /><br />And I couldn't help but smile at the ending! Awesome!MrsBlogAlothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09754196222405796214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-73137968011477213702011-04-18T14:25:50.155-04:002011-04-18T14:25:50.155-04:00Yes, I love the detail about the smoothie.Yes, I love the detail about the smoothie.Kristy @Loveandblasphemyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02634987114195614214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-37820555058175772672011-04-15T21:55:51.436-04:002011-04-15T21:55:51.436-04:00I was confused at first, the way the beginning was...I was confused at first, the way the beginning was laid out. You went from the present to the past too fast for my brain, I guess. <br /><br />The only thing that I just really couldn't 'buy' was the idea that the mother would call her son's best friend and just blurt out that he'd killed himself. I just felt like that sort of news would be best delivered in person rather TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-46068814997105252722011-04-15T19:41:22.895-04:002011-04-15T19:41:22.895-04:00Oh, wow! SO much drama and emotion.
Stopping by TR...Oh, wow! SO much drama and emotion.<br />Stopping by TRDC!<br /><br />http://allbtwnthelines.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-34952848798449150662011-04-15T17:41:54.501-04:002011-04-15T17:41:54.501-04:00I was just a little lost in the beginning and had ...I was just a little lost in the beginning and had to wonder if you were too...not sure where you were going with it. Once you got to know your character, you hit it and it was great. I think it was after the service....then you were there and had me there with you.Writerly Wanna Behttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00034679656184476657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-82399896055297558392011-04-15T14:19:14.239-04:002011-04-15T14:19:14.239-04:00You made my eyes wet too. And I swallowed my heart...You made my eyes wet too. And I swallowed my heart. Her pain is so poignant, so descriptive that I felt every lash of it. I felt the unwelcomeness of her brother daring to intrude on her misery. I felt the shock of the postcard. There are so many good lines in your story, I just can't pick one. <br /><br />Great job with this prompt!<br /><br />--The Drama Mama{Stephanie}The Drama Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01643310288610990260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-42997324406585920132011-04-15T10:01:42.185-04:002011-04-15T10:01:42.185-04:00Loved it! Your writing flowed easily & everyth...Loved it! Your writing flowed easily & everything seemed like it was really happening as I read it. Awesome how it ended, as well. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07491203463577127591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-5983484200604734582011-04-15T09:13:31.185-04:002011-04-15T09:13:31.185-04:00You snuck in both prompts! I'm jealous :)You snuck in both prompts! I'm jealous :)Erica Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11349348967479428632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-51865027150028248732011-04-15T08:00:16.599-04:002011-04-15T08:00:16.599-04:00Awesome story! Crafty for sure!!
I might have left...Awesome story! Crafty for sure!!<br />I might have left this line out:<br />"Not the least bit of sense"<br />but, well done for sure!!!<br />~ddawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15089788992642824340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-12113648963280263412011-04-15T07:40:22.516-04:002011-04-15T07:40:22.516-04:00I love the line about never making a smoothie agai...I love the line about never making a smoothie again.<br /><br />Not dead! Now there was a twist I didn't expect!Lisa @ Two Bears Farmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03464839163693785901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-39163075006895721202011-04-15T07:35:45.026-04:002011-04-15T07:35:45.026-04:00I love it...I want to know more!I love it...I want to know more!Teresa Kanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14637414178733769112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-16584604058947149622011-04-15T05:41:11.400-04:002011-04-15T05:41:11.400-04:00This was really good!! I could "feel" th...This was really good!! I could "feel" this piece, like I was in the kitchen with her and spatting with her brother. <br /><br />The only thing I did not like was the "men" comment. I don't think it is needed...<br /><br />other than that, awesome!Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18014210424987382382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-45534880121717575152011-04-15T05:27:55.564-04:002011-04-15T05:27:55.564-04:00very nice! both prompts worked in and an ending t...very nice! both prompts worked in and an ending that makes us wonder, with good writing to boot. very real.Kedahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03467573541576582062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-22347473327530529302011-04-15T02:46:30.222-04:002011-04-15T02:46:30.222-04:00Yeah, I also thought you were writing to the phone...Yeah, I also thought you were writing to the phone call prompt. Deftly done, my friend, deftly done.Rebecca Einstein Schorrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09304661918070274646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-67367814627785711522011-04-15T01:59:24.715-04:002011-04-15T01:59:24.715-04:00well done, Andrea!!!! I love it!well done, Andrea!!!! I love it!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06666555088992266185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-38502476620812792412011-04-15T01:50:39.910-04:002011-04-15T01:50:39.910-04:00Oh, sneaky... you built in both prompts. Nice work...Oh, sneaky... you built in both prompts. Nice work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6208706644410714856.post-4192851051702857772011-04-15T00:34:56.887-04:002011-04-15T00:34:56.887-04:00Oh! That's good!
I actually had an experience...Oh! That's good!<br /><br />I actually had an experience a little like that. The Mother of my "Little Brother" from the Big Brothers, Big Sisters program committed suicide on Sept. 7th. I got a letter from her on Sept. 9th which I saved for my Lil' Bro carefully (he was 11 at the time) until he was an adult and could treasure it for himself. On Sept. 11, 2001 the only break ICynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15300459671364768442noreply@blogger.com